Jujube/scenes - Revision history

Jujube at 15:40, 15 June 2020

2020-06-15T15:40:17Z

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	A few people noticed the struggle with the lock and key in assessment. This struggle is interesting — it's about coming into contact with something for the first time... going back to the idea of contact. I want to reshoot these with a new lock/key.		A few people noticed the struggle with the lock and key in assessment. This struggle is interesting — it's about coming into contact with something for the first time... going back to the idea of contact. I want to reshoot these with a new lock/key.

	=== feedback: ~~group crit~~ 15.10 (haircut, 1st coffee cut, mending, eating, sleeping) ===		=== feedback: Group Crit 15.10 (haircut, 1st coffee cut, mending, eating, sleeping) ===

	"Comfortable with the space"		"Comfortable with the space"
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	"Finding home in oneself -- but not much is shown about the body" -- Response: I have a strong interest in my hands. It is with my hands that I do. Doing seems very important to me, and the repetition that comes with it.		"Finding home in oneself -- but not much is shown about the body" -- Response: I have a strong interest in my hands. It is with my hands that I do. Doing seems very important to me, and the repetition that comes with it.

	=== feedback: David (GC materials) ===		=== feedback: David (Group Crit materials) ===

	This seems like an opening. Keep making them. ("Yes, these are among my favorite footage.")		This seems like an opening. Keep making them. ("Yes, these are among my favorite footage.")
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	No need to force this into the other stories, which by all means keep making.		No need to force this into the other stories, which by all means keep making.

	=== feedback: Ine (GC materials sans haircut) ===		=== feedback: Ine (Group Crit materials sans haircut) ===

	Home is a lot of gazing and being.		Home is a lot of gazing and being.

Jujube: /* confirmation */

2019-12-18T12:28:04Z

confirmation

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	=== confirmation ===		=== confirmation (after talking with David) ===

	- continue these acts, esp. regarding coffee - toothbrush/earrings - stone		- continue these acts, esp. regarding coffee - toothbrush/earrings - stone

	- use ~~checklist~~ from above to develop the shots		- use HOME IS from above to develop the shots

	== Derek's ==		== Derek's ==

Jujube: /* Antwerp */

2019-12-18T12:27:30Z

Antwerp

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	== Antwerp ==		== Antwerp ==

			How to compose the everyday with shots?

	=== shot list ===		=== shot list ===

Jujube: /* homecoming */

2019-12-18T11:55:23Z

homecoming

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	(older drafts: [[jujube/project-proposal-drafts]])		(older drafts: [[jujube/project-proposal-drafts]])

			= HOME IS =

			- Home is shelter.

			- Home is abundance.

			- Home is safety.

			- Home is free of judgement.

			- Home is quiet.

			- Home a collection of small, yet necessary activities.

			- Home is a collection of objects.

			- Home is lost and found.

			- Home is shared stories. (Simon suggests. I agree.)

	= homecoming =		= homecoming =

Jujube: /* checklist */

2019-12-18T11:54:42Z

checklist

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	Me: I am seeing a future shot (done in the studio) of the objects isolated against a minimal backdrop. They exist, but they are not grounded.		Me: I am seeing a future shot (done in the studio) of the objects isolated against a minimal backdrop. They exist, but they are not grounded.


	~~== checklist ==~~

	~~- Home is shelter.~~

	~~- Home is abundance.~~

	~~- Home is safety.~~

	~~- Home is free of judgement.~~

	~~- Home is quiet.~~

	~~- Home a collection of small, yet necessary activities.~~

	~~- Home is a collection of objects.~~

	== Den Haag ==		== Den Haag ==

Jujube: /* homecoming */

2019-12-18T11:54:26Z

homecoming

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	= homecoming =		= homecoming =

	== assessment 09.12 (extended coffee cut, Tom, apple, lemon) ==		== feedback ==

			=== assessment 09.12 (extended coffee cut, Tom, apple, lemon) ===

	D: Individual images are well-made.		D: Individual images are well-made.
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	Me thinking: I should use the filmming of Youqing and Sören to shape the story. First think about the shape of the story thats shoots with Marieke and Tom have provided. Film the lemon scene. Film the travel scene. Write the script over christmas.		Me thinking: I should use the filmming of Youqing and Sören to shape the story. First think about the shape of the story thats shoots with Marieke and Tom have provided. Film the lemon scene. Film the travel scene. Write the script over christmas.

	== feedback: Jamie 11.12 (extended coffee cut) ==		=== feedback: Jamie 11.12 (extended coffee cut) ===

	Jamie: There are a few moments of '''contact''' that pull the film together.		Jamie: There are a few moments of '''contact''' that pull the film together.
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	A few people noticed the struggle with the lock and key in assessment. This struggle is interesting — it's about coming into contact with something for the first time... going back to the idea of contact. I want to reshoot these with a new lock/key.		A few people noticed the struggle with the lock and key in assessment. This struggle is interesting — it's about coming into contact with something for the first time... going back to the idea of contact. I want to reshoot these with a new lock/key.

	=== feedback: group crit 15.10 ===		=== feedback: group crit 15.10 (haircut, 1st coffee cut, mending, eating, sleeping) ===

	"Comfortable with the space"		"Comfortable with the space"
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	"Finding home in oneself -- but not much is shown about the body" -- Response: I have a strong interest in my hands. It is with my hands that I do. Doing seems very important to me, and the repetition that comes with it.		"Finding home in oneself -- but not much is shown about the body" -- Response: I have a strong interest in my hands. It is with my hands that I do. Doing seems very important to me, and the repetition that comes with it.

	=== feedback: David ===		=== feedback: David (GC materials) ===

	This seems like an opening. Keep making them. ("Yes, these are among my favorite footage.")		This seems like an opening. Keep making them. ("Yes, these are among my favorite footage.")
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	No need to force this into the other stories, which by all means keep making.		No need to force this into the other stories, which by all means keep making.

	=== feedback: Ine ===		=== feedback: Ine (GC materials sans haircut) ===

	Home is a lot of gazing and being.		Home is a lot of gazing and being.
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	My packing list		My packing list

			=== feedback: Barend (early rushes in Den Haag) ===

			Barend: You mentioned showing small changes in close-up, the establishment of space might not be important

			Me: Still gonna shoot a few wide shots. Just to see. Perhaps won't use them.

			Barend: Are you going to let the viewer know if these objects are brought into the space? Or make it clear that these are other people's homes?

			Me: Not sure. I could shoot some unveiling scenes soon. (but don't see it in the narrative rn.) I see it in the context of the documentary. It's another storyline. It's like a dream... Dream of home.

			Me: I am seeing a future shot (done in the studio) of the objects isolated against a minimal backdrop. They exist, but they are not grounded.


	== checklist ==		== checklist ==
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	- Domesticity, "quotidien"		- Domesticity, "quotidien"

	~~=== feedback and thoughts ===~~

	~~Barend: You mentioned showing small changes in close-up, the establishment of space might not be important~~

	~~Me: Still gonna shoot a few wide shots. Just to see. Perhaps won't use them.~~

	~~Barend: Are you going to let the viewer know if these objects are brought into the space? Or make it clear that these are other people's homes?~~

	~~Me: Not sure. I could shoot some unveiling scenes soon. (but don't see it in the narrative rn.) I see it in the context of the documentary. It's another storyline. It's like a dream... Dream of home.~~

	~~Me: I am seeing a future shot (done in the studio) of the objects isolated against a minimal backdrop. They exist, but they are not grounded.~~

	== Antwerp ==		== Antwerp ==

Jujube: /* homecoming */

2019-12-18T11:50:42Z

homecoming

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 A few people noticed the struggle with the lock and key in assessment. This struggle is interesting — it's about coming into contact with something for the first time... going back to the idea of contact. I want to reshoot these with a new lock/key.
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 Shot: get shirt from a hanger.
 === confirmation ===

Jujube: /* feedback: Jamie (showed extended coffee cut 11.12) */

2019-12-11T09:56:07Z

feedback: Jamie (showed extended coffee cut 11.12)

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	Me thinking: I should use the filmming of Youqing and Sören to shape the story. First think about the shape of the story thats shoots with Marieke and Tom have provided. Film the lemon scene. Film the travel scene. Write the script over christmas.		Me thinking: I should use the filmming of Youqing and Sören to shape the story. First think about the shape of the story thats shoots with Marieke and Tom have provided. Film the lemon scene. Film the travel scene. Write the script over christmas.

	== feedback: Jamie (~~showed~~ extended coffee cut ~~11.12~~) ==		== feedback: Jamie 11.12 (extended coffee cut) ==

	Jamie: There are a few moments of '''contact''' that pull the film together.		Jamie: There are a few moments of '''contact''' that pull the film together.

Jujube: /* assessment 09.12 */

2019-12-11T09:55:51Z

assessment 09.12

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	= homecoming =		= homecoming =

	== assessment 09.12 ==		== assessment 09.12 (extended coffee cut, Tom, apple, lemon) ==

	D: Individual images are well-made.		D: Individual images are well-made.

Jujube: /* feedback: group crit 15/10 */

2019-12-11T09:55:23Z

feedback: group crit 15/10

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	Shot: get shirt from a hanger.		Shot: get shirt from a hanger.

	=== feedback: group crit 15/10 ===		=== feedback: group crit 15.10 ===

	"Comfortable with the space"		"Comfortable with the space"